This is great! The beginning is exactly how I imagined, it sets the mood of everything, gives you an idea of what you're in for... I love it.
THIS SUCKS MORE THAN SUCK WHERE IS THE GREATNESS FROM THE BEGINNING WHERE DID IT GO WHY DOES IT HATE ME *SOB*
The final, brilliant word on passive voice.
“She was killed [by zombies.]” <—- passive
“Zombies killed [by zombies] her.” <—- active
Oh my god, best passive voice identification tool ever.
This is on par with the moment that I learned “the alligator always eats the bigger number” when determining whether to use greater than or less than sign.
Life changing shit, seriously.